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Please review GB Press Release and indicate if you are OK or not and provide any comments.
1. Are you OK with press release as written?
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2. Comments on proposed Press Release
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| | My comments:
UCAIug needs to be spelled out. The users group full name needs to be included either next to the Logo, the opening paragraph (like was done with NIST) or in the closing paragraph. The UCAIug web site should appear in the document, perhaps in the closing paragraph.
The UCLIUG is not defined. It should be defined the first time it it is used. I could not find it on google. What is it? |
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| | I have forwarded my suggested comments to Kay... |
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